Then why do many in PR compose epistles that simply fall on deaf, uh, eyes?
Admit it. You know what it feels like to have a gruff editor or a reporter slam the phone down on your enthusiastic ear. It’s so not fun. It’s hard not to take it personally too. Pitch letters are good buffers—to get you in the door and introduce your client, product or service—and done right, you avoid being slammed.
A letter that affects all the right qualities shows someone that you understand your business, that you see how it fits into his beat or interests. The reporter, blogger, producer, or facilitator will be impressed—maybe shocked—that you’ve done your homework. Once and for all, let’s all remember that pitch letters should pique someone’s need for a story and not mere interest. They need not tell the entire story; these are teasers for the meat of your angle. (You have an angle, right? Don’t get me started!)
Here, then, are five tips to help you compose pitch letters that I know really work:
- Hit with your best shot. There you go! In that first sentence give the reporter something that will make him say either “Gee I never knew” or “That’s a fantastic freaking angle for a story.” Or better yet, get him to say both and you win a prize! Don’t mess around with formalities. And don’t bury the lead, or your angle, in hype, jargon or buzzwords. Buzzwords are so 1999.
- Make it damn personal. Ok, you could include basic points important for all reporters, but your pitch letter’s primary objective is to deliver a relevant and CUSTOMIZED angle to specific reporters. Trust me when I say that a “blast pitch letter” looks like one; reporters recognize it as such and place it in the ole circular file or in the handy folder called Deleted Items.
- It’s method, man. Letters delivered by email need different content than those delivered by envelope with stamp. Email limits you to the teeny and readable portion of the screen and so it must be pithy; there’s a hefty word tax for unnecessary expressions. With a hard copy letter, sent by mail or FedEx or messenger or fax (!), you have a whole page and as long as you start well your reader might somehow get to the end. On hard letters you can also include supporting information—fact sheets, backgrounders, bios, maybe even toss in a candy.
- You write, they read, it’s all good. Do not rush a letter. The process—finding the right targets, reviewing their recent work, writing, rewriting, editing, thinking, proofing—it takes time and it’s worth it. Like we always say at BPB: Spend time on one element of your job instead of rushing to do many.
- Proofread. Proofread. Oh and then proofread again. Proofreading is so important; gosh, it just is. It’s never more so than in a pitch letter. Don’t do it and you look—and feel—stupid. Please stop giving our venerable industry a bad name and just go over and ask a colleague— preferably one not on the same client account—to read your pitch letter critically.
The bottom line is just that. Make money with superior pitch letters. It’s a powerful means to introduce yourself – you get to make a point with fantastic uses of 26 letters. You achieve masterful results simply by varying the means by which you make contact. What’s the goal, everyone? To build lasting relationships with the media and so-called influencers, to maximize coverage opportunities! Isn’t that what’s on everybody’s list?
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Spot on! Love it.
ReplyDeleteIn fact, I love it so much, that I created my own blog post based on this piece.
http://freerangehumans.blogspot.com/2009/02/whats-difference-between-press-release.html
Hope you don't mind (I link to you 3 times in my post, so hopefully that makes up for calling a pitch letter 'a sort of press release thingy'...)
Regarding burying the lead or angle in hype, jargon, and buzzwords, I completely agree that these techniques are not really valid in most cases today. The reason being is that people are accustomed to seeing all of this. They don't need to be charmed like they may have been 10 years ago with fancy writing. They are busy and overwhelmed with information from the internet, so give it to them straight.
ReplyDeleteI (as a student) agree with almost everything about this post. My one dissenting opinion is that fax is pointless. Anything needing to be sent in real-time can be PDF'd and e-mailed. anything else can be sent via USPS or a courier (for all you ballers out there!)
ReplyDeleteAn editor came to one of my PR classes and said the only reason to mail a pitch nowadays is if you have an awesome press kit to go with it that can only be appreciated physically. Other than that, Great post!
I (as a student) agree with almost everything about this post. My one dissenting opinion is that fax is pointless. Anything needing to be sent in real-time can be PDF'd and e-mailed. anything else can be sent via USPS or a courier (for all you ballers out there!)
ReplyDeleteAn editor came to one of my PR classes and said the only reason to mail a pitch nowadays is if you have an awesome press kit to go with it that can only be appreciated physically. Other than that, Great post!
Really good tips, except that I don't think I would fax anything. I've never seen a newsroom fax machine (and I've seen quite a few of them) that wasn't turning out a stack of paper that mostly went straight into recycling. It's not a place to make a good first impression.
ReplyDeleteA letter is an interesting thought - I rarely got an on-paper pitch letter when I was a reporter. It might be a way to break through the clutter - if it's well done.
Great info...
ReplyDeleteSomeone said "send a press kit" in the mail and I have to say don't. Press kits are never ever ever read unless someone wants one. Letters in the mail that are written by you hand-addressed are awesome. Period. As for the fax, gee people keep saying that but I fax people all the time and get responses. So nah! Use the fax until it becomes another VHS (which incidentally I still use sometimes...weird huh). Thanks for the comments, I appreciate it tons.
ReplyDeleteEvan, as a student of PR it might be wise of you to just listen to what Mr. Laermer is saying and accept that he's one of the best PR pros out there right now. I made a mistake when I was first getting into PR as well; I assumed that everything I learned in college put me on the same level as people who had practiced PR for decades. Trust me, it didn't.
ReplyDeleteI'm a screenwriter trying to establish a career in Hollywood and i think the pitch letter/query letter info on this site is great.
ReplyDeleteI've heard of early 90's cases where writers would fax a pitch letter addressed to a particular exec., and it physically is laid on their desk to read, by their assistant. An un-avoidable pitch. AWSOME! Almost like a flyer.
But NOW things are differnet. Is there a way to avoid getting your email and faxes trashed (spammed in most cases because faxes are becoming digitized now). I know most people in these offices won't waste the time to open anything digital or physical (mail, ups, fedex) if they don't know the person sending it. Any suggestions?
Eric Jenkins
ewj1019@yahoo.com
Okay - As somebody on the receiving end of all these pitch letters (and, believe me, I have seen some doozies), I hope and pray every publicist out there reads this blog post.
ReplyDeleteI just got a pitch today from somebody extolling their beach toys. I write about television for families, for cripes' sakes. Hello? Where do beach toys fit into that? Let's not even talk about the pitch for Tire Safety Month.
As for hitting me with your best shot, that's okay, but I'm like the vast majority of editors/writers out there today, grossly overworked and underpaid. When I look at a pitch, my two basic questions are 1.) Is this something I can write about? and 2.) When do I have to think about this? I need all the relevant information up top and fast.
My other big gripe is when publicists suggest an angle for me. I'm a professional, guys. I can figure what angle is right for my pubs. Telling me what you think the angle should be is only going to get me to hit the delete button all the faster.
As for snail mail (don't have a fax, haven't needed one for years), please, please, please don't over-package it. I don't need two small hard-bound books filled with glossy images encased in colored lucite (got that one yesterday). I need information. I'm not down on swag, but, for cripes' sakes, make it useful! I don't need another poster and if you're going to send a freaking t-shirt, send it really huge so I can at least cut it down, if necessary.
And, please, read my blogs to make sure you want to pitch me. I have two. One is about television for families, one is about wines and wineries. I don't write about tires or spirits (alcoholic and otherwise) or beach toys or a host of other sh-... stuff.
Have mercy, gang. And if you do, I may just read your pitch letter, and better yet, may even decide to write about your client/project.
This is admittedly just my perspective, but I suspect I'm not the only editor writer out there thinking the same things. No, I know I'm not.